3/25 post 2

   Out of the papers that I have written, I am choosing to do my Literary Analysis. I am choosing to do this because writing about the short story will be easier and more enjoyable than any of the other papers, so I feel like it will be better for me to write about that. Writing about the short story I am more likely to want to do and not feel like I'm just trying to hurry and get it done. I think all of my writing could improve, but by working on something that is easier at first then it will make my future papers even better.
   As I am fixing things, two main things that I am going to focus on are conventions, and focusing on making sure the body supports the argument, and not telling the story as much, which Dr. D noted. I need to make sure I fix the comma splices, colons, etc. Also, to make sure my formatting is fixed where there was a little problem(stated by Dr. D).  Fixing these, I think that the paper will flow a lot better than before. I think that I need to fix this, because by starting with it, it will help me much more later.